From fce38c1539f738dc606e39a7b3e04f6cd0c4b94d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jerry Lee Date: Tue, 31 Oct 2017 10:53:14 +0800 Subject: [PATCH] improve wording --- .../part2-data-integration.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/log-what-every-software-engineer-should-know-about-real-time-datas-unifying/part2-data-integration.md b/log-what-every-software-engineer-should-know-about-real-time-datas-unifying/part2-data-integration.md index ccac194..1f0da98 100644 --- a/log-what-every-software-engineer-should-know-about-real-time-datas-unifying/part2-data-integration.md +++ b/log-what-every-software-engineer-should-know-about-real-time-datas-unifying/part2-data-integration.md @@ -219,7 +219,7 @@ 在更高层面上，无论你使用传统的数据仓库`Oracle`还是`Teradata`或`Hadoop`， 这个做法不会有太多变化，可能[调整](http://searchdatamanagement.techtarget.com/definition/Extract-Load-Transform-ELT)一下抽取和加载数据的顺序。 -数据仓库是极其重要的资产，它包含了的和规整的数据，但是实现此目标的机制有点过时了。 +数据仓库包含了规整的数据，是极其重要的资产，但是它实现这个目标的机制有些过时了。